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Zefer SCP 173 Elixer Test


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https://docs.google.com/document/d/1kNV__rQU0DS1zGF_vvNfN8ujB_gH9l9r5tCGFwtQkBM/edit?usp=sharing 

this was a nightmare cause my grammar program screwed up and wouldn't work for me so forgive the bad grammar i couldn't fix it 

but it took over an hour to make this doc so hopefully it turns out alright.   

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 Security Colonel Warden Legate Juggernaut Enforcer Research Administrator M.A.D. Site Operations Chief RRA Professor / MTF Delta-5 'Front Runners' Captain Veteran Raptor Operative / Internal Affairs Agency Assistant Director MTF Nu-7 'Hammer Down' Captain / Covert Agent / Deputy Head Field Training Officer / UN Global Occult Coalition Corporal Combat Medic Tactical Paramedic R&D Scientist  Marksman Recon Specialist / MTF Alpha-1 'Red Right Hand' Major Enforcer Squadron Lead

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TOTAL GRADE: 70/100 - Pretty cool log, could use a few changes here and there but other than that it's alright.

Length 25/25 - Good length and detailed.

Creativity: 20/25 - The test idea isn't 100% yours, it was taken from Acee to my knowledge.

Presentation: 10/25 - Overall doesn't look to good due to it having a random blank page, weird color choice for text, and several unnecessary 173 pictures.

Writing: 15/25 - I didn't quite understand why you didn't test elixir on yourself when you mention an MTF earlier in your log.

False Information included in log make sure to only put facts as 173 can be used together in groups of two or three as well also, CI found this elixir first.

CURRENT RANKS SCPRP: D5=SM

CURRENT RANKS POLICERP: PD=LCPL

RETIRED: GENSEC=SM D5=CPL CI=PVT Reasearch=RAS E-11=1LT 

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