MattMan Posted November 15, 2022 Share Posted November 15, 2022 Name: Matt2 Rank: OAhttps://docs.google.com/document/d/15bGfIYnbo6F_sjTypksf4VAqypNfgNkZ7FdSrpAB07k/edit?usp=sharing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FeaR x Green Pikachu Posted November 25, 2022 Share Posted November 25, 2022 Grade: 35/100 Approaching Expectations Efficiency: 8/25 Very little information learned at all, despite the fake rank, you could of asked layout of foundation, how RIGs/RISs work, why they joined foundation and not RND, ETC. Insight: 4/25 Not sure, what the goal was, some information was gained but I feel that you could of tried going for something more detailed that would help us: "How does 173s cell work?", "How many security are stationed right now?", "Which scps are on site?" Presentation: 10/25 I love anything other than the normal presentation! Still despite that, the presentation is bland, has some good qualities on it, but it still lacks. Writing: 9/25 Very few grammatical errors. Feel like you could also play with the font a bit more. Spacing is extremely inconsistent, Colors are good. Note: Interrogation lacks the roleplay aspect we need! or the good value questions, knowing a command is cool and all but in the long run that information does nothing to us at all. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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