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Interrogation of Anton.


MattMan

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  • 2 weeks later...

Grade: 35/100
Approaching Expectations

Efficiency: 8/25
Very little information learned at all, despite the fake rank, you could of asked layout of foundation, how RIGs/RISs work, why they joined foundation and not RND, ETC.


Insight:
4/25 Not sure, what the goal was, some information was gained but I feel that you could of tried going for something more detailed that would help us: "How does 173s cell work?", "How many security are stationed right now?", "Which scps are on site?"

Presentation: 10/25
I love anything other than the normal presentation! Still despite that, the presentation is bland, has some good qualities on it, but it still lacks.


Writing: 9/25
Very few grammatical errors. Feel like you could also play with the font a bit more. Spacing is extremely inconsistent, Colors are good.


Note: Interrogation lacks the roleplay aspect we need! or the good value questions, knowing a command is cool and all but in the long run that information does nothing to us at all.

 

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