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Test 01 | SCP-173 | "Mirror Test" ~ JR Price


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Test idea - 19/25 - Interesting test idea.

 

Grammar - 19/25 - Overall, good spelling. But, I see some issues. It is just like adding "an" in front of some words. There were also some punctuation errors, which you could add, and when you were supposed to say "sight" you said "sigh". But, I don't see much more.

 

Presentation/format - 20/25 - The format was basic. I recommend making your own format so it can be more "original." But it does work. The presentation could be improved by, for example, bringing the texts closer together.

 

Quality/length 16/25 - OK lenght, maybe add some more background history and earlier research. Quality was OK would recommend maybe making some stuff up, as we encourage that. It will make the text stand out more and make the text more "one-of-a-kind." But, continue doing test logs!

 


Overall 74/100 - Alright job!

Research Assistant Manager | Research Field Agent Bourbon OA2 | Professor RRA

 

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