Test Log on SCP-714, Aka The Jaded Ring

[PabloProo123]

Link to the Log:  https://docs.google.com/document/d/1KIMxW1bkyUwq0jMN9RjoWDQDThuyx1V4y0aWI5xpNUo/edit?usp=sharing

[Grizz80]

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[Stuffstealer]

Test Idea/Creativity: 12/25 From what I can tell, your hypothesis was that "the Jaded Ring has some anomalous effects", which is basically just putting it on someone and seeing what happens. Please actually have a goal for your testing to prove or disprove. 

Example: How does the Jaded Ring effect those who are lobotomized/those who are missing certain body parts? Try to incorporate at least one other branch (besides escorts) in your future tests.

Format: 15/25 Different fonts are used unnecessarily, some paragraphs are written in exclusively bold font, while others have no bold at all. There was a blank empty page which should have been deleted. The "some extra info" section should have been with the background information.

You forgot to replace the areas where you would input information with the actual information

Example of this: Use "Junior Researcher Pablo " instead of "(RANK + NAME) Junior Researcher Pablo", in the future make sure to delete the bold part and those similar to it, the text in the ()'s are to tell you what information to put in, delete them when you are done

Spelling/Grammar: 10/25 A large quantity of serious grammatical/syntax errors, as well as completely incorrect capitalization, there wasn't a single instance of capitalization being used correctly in your largest paragraph. Please read over things before you submit them.

Writing: 0/25  Your background research section is too short and 100% plagiarized, please either write your own background or site where you got it from. [https://the-scp.foundation/object/scp-714]

Total: 37/100 This was more suited for an activity log. Please understand that all of this is constructive criticism that will hopefully help you write better docs.