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Valentine Interogation


Henry Townshend

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Efficiency: 5/25

You basically got no good information , this may've not been your fault however you didn't ask any good questions.

 insight 5/25

You didn't follow up with the questions which you asked which is something you should've such as when you asked for his name and rank he only gave his name.
 

Presentation 10/25

The sentences are not spaced out which may make it hard to read with however good use of colours , if your looking to go into command it'd be better to have your own format

 

Writing: 15/25

The grammar is not up to standard however you use good use of the surrounding area by showing what happens such as the door opening or when the hostage is being taken out

 

Score: 35

 

 

Current : SEC JFTO 2LT Mean WD Tessarius Flavia MAGI

Former RND HFTO ARCH Mean / V1 Griffith I / CI 2LT Mean  / E-11 DoCE MSGT Mean / RRH Analyst X ray 23 D5 DHFTO 2LT Mean MTF G9 Jötunn GD4 

 

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