Walker-Mayhem Posted August 25, 2022 Share Posted August 25, 2022 (edited) [In-Game Name] Stark [Call-sign] HX7 [Rank] 1LT [Which lore squad member are you applying for] V07, Marksman [Why do you believe you deserve this position] I strongly believe that I deserve this position because I am highly dedicated to the job but I also don't like to give up easy, meaning that no matter what I do or how long I take, I will be very dedicated and persistence in everything that I do. I also feel like that with my activity, timezone difference and how often I can be on that it would make me a great addition to the team because I would be able to be on the server during uptimes and downtimes making that their is always a TI-23 unit Member on when potentially not many are seen to some. If i am given that great honour of joining the TI-23 Unit I will make sure that I will uphold and honour everything that it stands for and means like I already do within the Death Trooper Company, whether it be from successful use of equipment, following orders or completing the mission or objective furthermore. I strongly believe that I am fit for this role aswell because I love the fact that V07 is a marksman and that is one of my favourite things within roleplay. If I am accepted to become V07 I will give it my all to learn and understand the Unit and my V07 role making sure that I am highly effective at my job to both help my unit and my VIP to complete our objective and/or mission. I also believe that where I currently stand in the Death Trooper Company no matter where I am or what position I will hold that I am seen as dedicated and will always go above and beyond for my team. [Why do you want to be a part of Unit TI-23] I would love to be a part of Unit TI-23 because I would like to be apart of an elite squad, but I especially want to be apart of the team that is able to work with a group/team especially in a close group scenario, making sure that we do whatever it takes to complete our objective/mission. If I am successful in becoming a Unit member of TI-23 it shows that I have come so far and achieved great things just by doing my job and following orders but also tells me that if you truly put your head down and strive for what you want best it really can happen and come true. Me becoming V07 of the TI-23 unit would be fabulous as I will uphold what it takes and means to be successful at my marksman title, but also I would be in a Unit/Team with other fabulous DT members doing what we love best. It also furthermore increases my skills and knowledge within the Death Trooper's Company. Overall I would love to become apart of the TI-23 unit because, becoming V07 (The Marksman) has always been a goal of mine to join but also that I would love to be in a unit full of other members that can help me improve to be better at my role and my title which can lead myself with more skills, experiences, leadership and making me way more effective within DT, which then later down the track is put back into DT to help and support the new wave of Death Trooper Members and myself knowing that i have done something like this truly would be unbelievable and a dream come true. [What does Unit TI-23 do] The TI-23 Unit or known as "The Undying" is a squad based lore unit that consist of five members. Each member of TI-23 is specialized in their own own way with their own set of equipment to help them complete there objective/mission. The TI-23 Unit have their own type of VIP's' that differ from the regular Death Troopers. TI-23 are also heavily redacted and focus on direct combat and VIP protection. The following are what the members are equipped with and also their speciality. F16 (The Squad Leader) : F16 is equipped with a DP-23 (Shotgun), Detonator, Flashbang, Booster bacta-kit, deployable shield and an E-11s. L21 (Demolition Specialist) : L21 is equipped with a E-11D, thermal detonator, a detonator, deployable shield, and a fusion cutter. M36 (Medical Specialist) : M36 is equipped with the standard E-11D, duel RK3 pistols, booster bacta kit, armour kit and shield generator. C37 (CQB Specialist) : C37 is equipped with a DP-23 shot gun, flash bang and a deployable shield. V07 (Marksman Specialist) : V07 is equipped with the E-11s and a deployable shield. [How active can you be] As of currently I am available at any time of the week both during up and downtimes of the server due to me living in Australian making me 14 hours ahead of EST I can be flexible on the server [Do you understand that if you are accepted into Unit TI-23, you will be on a 1-strike system] Yes I understand Edited August 25, 2022 by Walker-Mayhem Senior Moderator Walker | Death Troopers HX7 | Royal Guard Shadow Guard Walker | EX : SHGO Lore Senior Guard Walker/Vacander Jax | EX : Shock Command Lieutenant Colonel Mayhem & K2S0 | Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SilonMist Posted August 25, 2022 Share Posted August 25, 2022 When reading your application I get distracted by the use of "i" instead of "I". It feels as if you typed this application on your phone, while in a rush, and didn't think the formatting mattered. I'm not sure someone who doesn't want to take the time to correct a small detail like this would do well with details in a team based unit, where detail is important. The last paragraph also feels like you reworded the description of TI-23 straight from the SOP. You didn't get creative or go in depth on the descriptions. For this position you must be active in the regiment, but it seems you are semi-active and are struggling with quota currently. You seem to have a good heart, as for the actual content of your application. I can see that you want the position, but as for actually taking the steps, I'm not quite sure. Keep in mind, I do not say these things to discourage you; only to inspire you and show your weaknesses. I want you to be successful, but if I pretended like these were not issues, you would not improve. TI-23 is elite, and you have to treat it like it is. If I don't see the effort, I can't support you getting the position. Good luck,-Support 1 OG DT TI-23 Marksmen V07 (Retired)Former: Senior Gunnery Officer LX003, Lord I Silon, DT 1LT DI3, Imperial RP Moderator Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Daze Posted August 28, 2022 Share Posted August 28, 2022 Former/Retired: Death Trooper Commander/LTCOL/SV02 Assistant Head Gamemaster + Senior Admin Current: Crunch's Son Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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