SchosBro Posted June 9, 2022 Share Posted June 9, 2022 https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ZZL79LhTpRbNet08ds_mZi8CLkHxwDQWnZ_G0tpTWv4/edit?usp=sharing 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Schölinger Posted June 9, 2022 Share Posted June 9, 2022 THIS IS AN UNOFFICIAL REVIEW, AND DOES NOT COUNT AS A GRADE. IT SHOULD BE CONSIDERED OOC. As stated in the document itself, I pre-reviewed this and went over a few of the spelling and grammatical errors that needed to be addressed with you. For your very first document, you understood the purpose of each section of the template well, which gets you a step ahead of some of your competition. In the future, I would recommend spicing up your documents a bit by maybe creating your own template (or reach out to me to borrow some of mine!) and adding a bit of color to bring some creative flair to your documentation! The experiment itself was nice to see-- Few people actually test on SCP-005, so I'm happy to see people exploring some of our less-tested-upon SCPs. Don't be afraid to ask an Event Team member to play an SCP that isn't on the server if you want to do some more interesting tests-- Just make sure that their class (Safe/Euclid/Keter) is a class your rank is authorized to test upon. Eager to see more tests from you in the future! Current: Goofball Former: RnD Delta Command, Foundation Doctor, RFA Agent, RRH Analyst Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tylerdiffee1 Posted June 15, 2022 Share Posted June 15, 2022 Test log assigned for grading Wait 1-3 days for your final score! DHOR Tyler I Event Team Leader [ETL] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ren1point0 Posted June 15, 2022 Share Posted June 15, 2022 Hello! Typography/Grammar: 10 No mistakes (i noticed) Writing: 9 I liked the writing style, just some things I would have done different Format: 9 Original! And pretty good at that, nice job Overall: 28 Nice log! Would love to see more from you in the future! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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