SillySadass Posted March 14, 2022 Share Posted March 14, 2022 (edited) https://docs.google.com/document/d/1UVkj0RQkyzYEvOy2-ZvQWJ45YIPsTNnRZ_rWeK9hS3A Enjoy! Edited March 14, 2022 by SillySadass Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cecil Stedmen Posted March 17, 2022 Share Posted March 17, 2022 Test log assigned! Please wait 1-3 days for grading! Former SCPRP: CI R&D Chief Director of Operations || Research Administrator || RFA Operations Advisory || RRH Analyst Xray 77 || CI General || Senior Event Team || CI Lieutenant Commander || Exemplary Investigator Award Recipient || STF D4 Poseidon PL7 || A1 SPC "Quantum" Former ImperialRP: Naval Captain || Security Director || GM VI Former PoliceRP: EMS Captain || RRU Rapid Response Team Manager || FBI Assistant Director Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super_Smitty Posted April 5, 2022 Share Posted April 5, 2022 (edited) Test Score Sheet Grammar : 8/10 So your grammar wasn't bad, it just was weirdly worded a lot. Example(s): "SCP-343 is perfectly harmless thus far" sounds weird and wrong, maybe go into example like "SCP-343 has shown no harmful intents or actions so far" "He does not seem to be of any race; he was contained in the foundation when a staff member witnessed him disappear from the street that he was walking on." that semi colon was weird and only kinda connects, I assume you were going with this member of the foundation didn't notice he had a race but I wouldn't have used the semi-colon there. "An example of this being that" just sounds weird " as the “Panacea”" has no period at the end the link at the end was incorrectly hyperlinked Creativity : 8/10 I love how you decided to just do interview sections about specific SCP's to SCP-343. The only reason why you have points off is because your conclusion and hypothesis wasn't truly there. Your hypothesis wasn't a testing hypothesis (although I know what you were going for) and your conclusion was only on SCP-500. I would have done a summary of them all at the end or a conclusion at the bottom of each one but anyway, that was ironically also by far the best part of your log. If you didn't know, attempts to recreate SCP-500 have been extremely difficult and have failed every time. So if you do a test log about SCP-343 trying to recreate SCP-500 and go into more details it would be amazing. Besides this your 098 section was also weirdly funny and interesting. Oh BTdubs: "Silly: Alright. This interview will be used for your file, are you okay with that?" Is just a weird question to ask.... Design / Format : 7/10 The placement of your photos was weird, the separation of interviews didn't seem to be done very well. I would recommend trying to separating the interviews by page. Its hard to point this section out over text but that is the best way I could explain. If you would like further details on the formatting feel free to contact me. Final Test Score : 23/30 So I remember reading this with Billy for his writing competition. You were in the running for a while so just know this is a good test log. But the flaws I have pointed out are the ones which are your weakness with test logs. Please work on them, it could easily change your next test log to be a wanderers library level of document. Edited April 5, 2022 by Super_Smitty Senior Event Team | Deputy Head of Research | Superstar Badge Winner | Foundation Star Award RFA - Agent Sigma 0A0 / RRH Analyst - Sierra 17 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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