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Leww

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Grammar: (6/10)

Some flaw in your grammar and areas in the log that don't make sense. And overall was very simple.

Design: (6/10)

I enjoy that you made a google doc and did some nice design work with it, but some of the colors used in it are harsh on the eyes. Along side with that your spacing between dialogue notes was too much and felt more as a buffer to increase page count

Lore: (6/10)

Very very basic, and not too much information about the SCP. Would encourage more background information and descriptions of the SCP

Creativity: (6/10)

I really enjoy the dialogue style of document.

TOTAL: 6/10

NOTES:

This is a really good attempt at a document, and you have a lot of potential for growth!

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