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9.6 / 10 - EXCELLENT

+ 9.4 / 10 Excellent Grammar.

+ 9.2 / 10 Lore Truthfulness.

+ 9.8 / 10 Excellent Details/Very Well Written.

+ 10 / 10 Perfect Spelling, No spelling errors.

+ 10 / 10 Phenomenal Creativity.

+ 10 / 9.5 Excellent Introduction Format.

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Note:  Just a few minor grammatical errors, Excellent Veracity in keeping up with the lore-based Information That we have about SCP-035 till now, Excellent details/markings throughout the Doc/Log and Extremely well written, No spelling errors, Phenomenal Creativity They Never Officially Tested If SCP-035 Can Eat however Captive the eyes of The reader By the idea, Overall an Excellent test idea, Introduction to the events is practically flawless, it just needs a slightly better initial introduction header.

                                   CONGRATULATIONS FROM FORMER RS Avalon Levi✨

 "So do not fear, for I am with you; do not be dismayed, for I am your God" ~ Isaiah 41:10
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