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Test to see if 173 has and emotional conection / if he has a VTA (ventral tegmental area)


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I...wha...What the FUCK did I just read?

I don't think I can give this a numerical score but...alright.

Pros: 

The formatting is solid, even if it could stand to be a bit more organized in places.

The concept is interesting, since we know its sentient despite any discernable method of thought. Its nice to see someone trying to analyze the statue beyond hehe neck go snap.

Cons:

This is entirely too horny. Like, way too horny. Do not pass go, do not collect 200 dollars, directly to horny jail horny. Don't. I don't care if its what the actual D class said because I am sure you probably got someone who said that stuff, but like...bruh.

Grammar and punctuation is messy, not awful, but messy.

This doesn't really answer the question you were trying to ask.

 

You could give it another go, but dear god, let them build a connection another way, I would snap their neck too for that lmao. 

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