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Official Scoring System (PROJECT - Harsher Grade)

*Due to the reputation of previous test

grade: A

Total: 21/25 

Creativity: 5/5

Usefulness: 4/5   (Listed Below)

Writing: 4/5   (Gramatical)

Presentation: 5/5 

Realism: 3/5   (Listed Below)

Notes:

After reviewing this test and doing background searches, I've concluded some errors within the test (listed below [Harsher grading - Great test])

                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                              

  • Your OMD chemical "Trioxide-monoazide" from looks is very similar to Zn3(AsO4)2 (zinc arsenate) which is a low combustible that does not have a dissolving property. 

 

  • Using Hydrogen Peroxide H2O2 does not balance the equation, and therefore it can't be a "neutralizer" for Trioxide-monoazide (AsZn) O3.
    • Math: 3H2O + O3AsZn = 3H2O2 + AsZn (The original resulted in a negative coefficient meaning that distilled water must be used to neutralize the Trioxide-monoazide and the byproducts are hydrogen peroxide and AsZn [AsZn is not a stable compound and would combined to form a stable valence shell)
      •  A simple but powerful acid, NHO3 or Nitric Acid, has been known for dissolving lipids, nucleic acid, and proteins; and can be neutralized by NaHCO3 or Baking Soda. (This may of been a better option in the test)

 

  •  The aspects of using corrosive material from contained scp's has some problems.
    • SCP-106, the implication of the SCP's acid may cause a corrosive effect on any surface (Not a result that your wanting ["non-organic Materials (aka Metal, glass, plastic)" *Hypothesis*]
    • SCP-035, I agree the use of this SCP because of the degradation of tissue, but when the SCP is applied to inorganic object there is still degradation but at a different rate. [Allines with hypothesis, nice]

 

  • Grammatical errors

                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                              

 

SCP wiki's

SCP-035: https://scp-wiki.wikidot.com/scp-035 Quote used: "A highly corrosive and degenerative viscous liquid...substance slowly decays over a period of time, depending on the material" (Disc. #2).

SCP-106: https://scpcb.fandom.com/wiki/SCP-106 Quote used: "SCP-106 causes a 'corrosion' effect in all solid matter it touches, engaging a physical breakdown in materials several seconds after contact" (Disc. Line#2)

 

Chemical References: 

https://cameochemicals.noaa.gov/chemical/4798

https://pubchem.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/compound/Nitric-acid

https://www.webqc.org/balance.php (Chemical balance calc) *My scratch paper is full, but i'm not posting it (same answer)*

 

                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                              

 

If there is any misunderstandings of the info above, please comment below so there can be a review of the test's materials. 

As DHMR, I approve the usage of this but with a different chemical (unless debunked), But I do not approve of the usage of SCP-106 due to the corrosive properties associated with the black inchor.  The test will be brought to a command member that can approve the utilization of "OMD."

 

*Loved this test and I had to really look hard just to nitpick the test*

 

If you have any questions about your test score do not hesitate to contact MR Command.

 

Additional Notes: *You gotta love a BioChem Major*

Official Scoring System (PROJECT)

 

grade: S

Total: 25/25 

Creativity: 5/5

Usefulness: 5/5  

Writing: 5/5  

Presentation: 5/5 

Realism: 5/5   

Notes:

  • Great attention to detail
  • Can be used by our mobile forces
  • Never seen a corrosive chemical test
  • Simple writing and contains numbers on roll
  • Clean format that looks professional

Loved this test

If you have any questions about your test score do not hesitate to contact MR Command.

|RRH Tango 63| CI RND AIN Rusty BSA192 | EOI | Head Medical Research | DHFTO |

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