Diavolo Posted May 11, 2021 Share Posted May 11, 2021 https://docs.google.com/document/d/1xXeG180aO7H0l8xGluB3eNx5UWZaqT8TsDyVlpI_Bxw/edit?usp=sharing King Crimson "This is a test...I've accepted this test to stand victorious against my past. A person grows once they are able to defeat their weaker self. Wouldn't you agree?" - Diavolo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wagner Posted May 11, 2021 Share Posted May 11, 2021 AWESOME FORMAT again, BUT I noticed some of the "Conversational parts of the log" were a bit clumped together, I really liked that you kept certain words or people the same color throughout the log. Also it's good to include the background information about the SCPs that you are testing on BUT make sure that doesn't take the majority of your log. Feel free to make stuff up, just try not to contradict what the lore is already. Nice test idea, again it's common for Researchers to use SCP-999 to calm other SCPs but again that's ok as long as it's a well written log. Which this log is! Length again isn't bad but it does seem the background information takes up most of you log (which is ok). So I don't know if that's info you got from the SCP Wiki or what. For future logs just try to keep that in mind. Another really well done log! || Former Research Assistant Manager || || Former Gensec 1LT || / || Former Gensec PWD || || Former Maintenance Manager || / || Former Containment Specialist Manager || || Former MTF D5 SSGT || / || Former G9 Draugr G5 || Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
recon Posted May 12, 2021 Share Posted May 12, 2021 Test log has been assigned for grading! Please wait 1-3 days for grade. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moonrose Posted May 12, 2021 Share Posted May 12, 2021 10/10 A+ I really like this, the Formatting was nice, I didn't see any misspelling, I love the role play this seem like it had a lot of hard work put into it you did wonderful! I would love to see more test logs like this! also love the pic of 999 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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