Mary Posted October 1, 2020 Share Posted October 1, 2020 (edited) https://docs.google.com/document/d/1m_8rhmjF-0TvoGSqukojWGPnRe6qYWaqKMaelyuP7mE/edit?usp=sharing SCP-323 ----> http://www.scpwiki.com/scp-323 EDIT: Changed the link due to it being able to edit, I don't know how that happened. Edited October 1, 2020 by MaryAteHerLamb Free From GL Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeoID Posted October 1, 2020 Share Posted October 1, 2020 Grade: 90/100 Lore: 20/25 - SCP-682 and SCP-323s lore was followed correctly, though I was a little confused as to why we were in the foundation in the first place! Creativity: 25/25 - Great job here! Love the idea and the suspenseful ending! Presentation: 25/25 - Pretty good here! I like your format edit! Writing: 20/25 - A few small errors, the biggest being the spacing at the end of the log put half the info on the bottom on an entirely new page.Final Notes: So, the biggest issue here, is there is more context needed as to why we were in the foundation in the first place for this test! Also, not going to count it against you, but try to add a lot more dialog next time! Character development is huge! With Best Regards,CI R&D Deputy Director Of Operations|| - Retired SCP-RP Event Team Leader || Retired SCP-RP Admin || -Retired CI R&D Head of Research|| Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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