RadioactiveUnicorn Posted June 17, 2020 Share Posted June 17, 2020 https://docs.google.com/document/d/1A2JpnT9Sle4c-29IirVS5lZSTAnJEY-eiA26Rbqo4t8/edit?usp=sharing This is my first time using google docs. I may have shared it improperly. If you can edit the document let me know as it may have been tampered with. DON'T SHOOT! I'M NO LONGER WITH THE SCIENCE TEAM! | Nyarlethotep is my RPname Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr. Lee Posted June 17, 2020 Share Posted June 17, 2020 Test Has Been Assigned. Femboy Hooters. No Cogs he's mine. Omi9 2LT Lee JL6 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kumandant Posted June 20, 2020 Share Posted June 20, 2020 Score: 77/100 Grade: Standard Lore: 15/20 Everything seems fine with the lore. I appreciate your attempt on expanding SCP-087. However the use of amnestics were inaccurate, and the Class-D's behaviour directly contradicted the background research. It's okay to edit the results if it will make it fall more inline with lore. Creativity: 15/20 A standard SCP-087 expedition, nothing too ground breaking. But the inclusion of the "Ectoplasm", while being gross, was unique. Presentation: 17/20 The presentation is generally good, but feels a bit plain. I recommend experimenting with more fonts and images. Writing: 30/40 The writing is fairly decent. Everything is coherent, and clearly proofread. However more time could have been spent on analysing the slime, as it was implied to be the focus of the log. The use of amnestics, (while not being completely lore friendly), was entertaining to read. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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