I disappear Posted April 13, 2020 Share Posted April 13, 2020 https://docs.google.com/document/d/1NnXx51l9zpisoTKsV6Eu72c5RD_V-v6BvvHYm1SX3RY/edit?usp=sharing 'Cause you can't feel my anger You can't feel my pain You can't feel my torment Driving me insane Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kami- Amaterasu Posted April 14, 2020 Share Posted April 14, 2020 Grade:80 Creativity: 30/35 Nice idea! perhaps it'll even make little 999s Presentation: 20/25 Its well presented however I suggest spacing after lines to make it look cleaner (It also allows for more pages ;)) Writing: 30/40 The capitalization could be fixed and theres a couple grammar errors Test quality: Standard Extra Notes: Seems like 999 is pretty explosive! [SCP-RP] Retired: CI RND DHOR/RA/CIN, Engineer/OS, Omi9 Maj, SET. [IMP-RP] Previous: CMO Captain, SFL, Tank VCMDR Shock VCMDR GMVIII Officially Married to Mary 2/23/23 EMPRESS OF D-BLOCK Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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