SCP-966 Test

[Blueprint]

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1i01kTJUkjFPDarH9UlBo5XaxF-BZ-xDx7kSQ3pQ68NE/edit?usp=sharing

[Emoonk]

Test has been assigned for grading.

[Kumandant]

Score: 78/100

Grade: B+

Lore: 15/20
Though SCP-966's reactions do seem reasonable, I would have loved to see it act a little more 'beast-like'. A creature such as SCP-966, wouldn't likely sit still after being poked by a human, especially when in-lore, they are said to be fragile. Perhaps adding further characteristics such as SCP-966 emitting screeches to cause sleep deprivation within the Class-D, would further portray a more accurate depiction of the SCP.

Creativity: 15/20
The concept is fairly strong, however its execution ends up being quite underwhelming, as the experiment gives very short and repetitive results.

Presentation: 18/20
The presentation is generally well made, however the excessive use of colour does make it difficult to read at times. There is a total of 7 different colours used for your text. Try to limit your palette down to around 3-4.

Also, try to be mindful of the background. The dark greens on the black background is quite straining to read.

Writing: 30/40
The accompanying description that follows each of the Class-D's actions allow for the events of the experiment to easily be followed. There are also no major spelling and grammar mistakes, making the overall log very cohesive.

Though the information presented is straight forward, it quickly begins to get very repetitive. You could have remedied this issue by theorizing reasonings behind SCP-966's reactions, such as its aversion and aggression towards the lighter, being the result of fear from the emiting light source, or perhaps some other enate primal instinct. By creating more details, you are also able to create more variety in your results.

Other than that, the log is fairly well made. The paragraphs were written with good consistency, and the overall log is passable to enjoy. I'll give this a Quality.