french fry Posted November 1, 2019 Share Posted November 1, 2019 RP name: Fry Steam ID:76561198320030042 Rank: Dev JR FOUNDATION EYES ONLY PROJECT SCANV47-1. A PROMISING WEAPON DEVELOPMENT PROJECT PROJECT Scanv47-1 WEAPONS DEVELOPMENT RESEARCH WEAPON NAME: SCANV47 The Scanv47 is a heavily modified ak47 with a custom camber that fills hollow 45. Cal bullets with a heavily modified virus of 049-2 when fired, once on impact the virus will kill the threat 3-4 minutes with one shot and destroy itself upon Brain death. More bullet impacts speeds up the process of brain death. A smaller scale prototype (a smg) is being used for testing to make sure it works as intended before moving onto a Rifle modell. How the virus works once the virus infects the subject upon impact, it shall travel through The bloodstream where it will head straight to the brain and destroy the organ. Once death is confirmed by the lack of electrical signals in the brain the virus shall destroy itself via destruction of the protein shell. As a safety mechanism, if the virus manages to exit the body, the virus will destroy itself via destruction of the protein shell. Development of the virus The virus was developed from samples from SCP- 049-2 using top notch foundation Gene editing technology (also known as FGET-1) using the most sterile environments to insure maxium safety. Sample Collection was Approved By HOR Weiss. Test 1 Subject: D-214 subject , was shot in the knee cap, subjects intelligence has decreased in 1 minute , subject could not respond to commands in 2 minutes , subject was taken to med-bay, but experienced brain death, whilst getting a PET-scan for signs of consciousness. Test 2 Subject: D-533 Subject shot in the chest, subject couldn't say words at 1 minute into impact,, subject lost all ability to function in 1 minute and 30 seconds, but brain scans showed the subject was still alive, but not reacting to stimuli. Subject expired due to shock. Autopsy revealed damage to the brain was massive, causing a loss of blood in the subject. Test 3 subject: D-099 Subject was shot in the chest, in one minute in subject had slurred speech, trouble following directions, in 2 minutes subject could not communicate, and in 3 minutes subject was declared brain dead summary Research was promising in showing this new weapon to be deployed by MTF squads to quickly eliminate threats very quickly. Study also showed multiple shots shortened the length of time for brain death. This weapon was designed to quickly neutralize high threats. Worked quite a while on this so, please tell me ways to improve myself to create high quality research papers. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Breen Posted November 2, 2019 Share Posted November 2, 2019 Score: 55/100 Grade: F Lore: 0/20 SCP-049-2 is not created by a virus, but by SCP-049's unknown anomalous abilities. Creativity: 20/20 A very creative idea, I have not seen much like it; however, I am not in development so I have not seen many development tests. It also seems like powergaming. Presentation: 15/20 The test log was pretty hard to read, there was an inconsistent amount of spaces between sections, subtitles were not highlighted, and the gene-editing technology's name was... questionable. However, the log was at least organized which is a huge positive Writing: 20/40 Lots of grammar errors, capitalization errors, punctuation errors, unnecessary words, and some spelling errors. Your main downfall with this test was the grammatical and spelling errors; the fact it completely conflicted with lore also added to the low grade. I like the idea as a whole, but just remember to read up on the SCPs you work with and work on the spelling and grammar and you should be set! gog Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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