William Tikaki

Score - 90 Grade - Quality Lore - 20/20 SCP-1048 has generally acted just like it has in lore. On the surface, it was observed to be a sentient toy, that was designed to be played with by children. SCP-1048's response was only natural. Creativity - 17/20 Though I have seen this concept done before, the execution is magnificent. Each outfit has a specific and unique scenario, giving much variety in the results. Presentation - 16/20 This test gas generally followed the format, however the use of color and even spacing has made it very easy and pleasant to look at. Writing - 37/40 I am unable to find any general mistakes in your writing, as the grammar and punctuation is basically fine. However I do wish that you had put more detail into Outfit C, as its results seemed a bit lackluster compared to Outfit A, and Outfit B. The conclusion could also have been lengthier, however most of the general information is there. Some insight about the security personnel would have been useful as well. But other than that, I can't find anything else wrong with the writing.