Dr. Zitterman Posted March 12, 2023 Share Posted March 12, 2023 Accessing SCP-713... 1 Proficient Technical Researcher Dr. Jake Zitterman | Agent Banksy IN-1 FBI OPEN UP! Unusual Incidents Unit Director Stan Smith Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bobawhy Posted March 13, 2023 Share Posted March 13, 2023 Grammar/writing: 24/25— One singular imperfection in your grammar, but the writing is perfect. Creativity/Execution: 25/25—Very creative document, I like SCP-713 too; I always enjoy off-server SCPs too. Lore: 25/25—Nothing I noticed wrong, embedded links were a cool addition. Length/Format: 25/25— Length was nice, more of a shorter document for your standards. Format is perfect as always. TOTAL: 99/100— Quit try-harding nerd. ALL EX: bobawhy/oni/sukuna current ranks: ci lcmd | a-1 enlisted | certified dumbass | event team member | moderator ex-ranks: scp-rp senior moderator + event team member | police-rp moderator | research lcmd we dont talk about my time as omega-1 lt-cmdr that never happened Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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