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Grammar/writing: 18/25— The writing was great, however the grammar needs to be worked on. 100% some unnecessary profanities in there too.

Creativity/Execution: 23/25—Very creative document, and it was executed fairly well.

Lore: 20/25—Lore use was fairly well executed.


Length/Format: 24/25— Length was nice, format could use a bit of work though.

 


TOTAL: 85/100— I think a little more effort could have been put into the grammar, other than that I don't have any issues and it was a great read!
 

ALL EX: bobawhy/oni/sukuna

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we dont talk about my time as omega-1 lt-cmdr that never happened

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