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No Eyes, Just Legs. Sniperz Test Log #1


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[EOI Log Rating]

 

 

Lore: 10/25

Nothing to really go over Lore wise. Decent Lore is given, and overall details about Alpha agents is nice to hear.


Creativity: 14/25
the Idea is unique and explained well, but I feel this makes little use of the idea of attaching and modifying SCP-131 to certain things. It would be nice to see this idea built upon.

 

Presentation: 5/25
sadly the format is the same as always. Building a new format or using another's is a great way to show time and work put into the document. I recommend if you have great test/interro idea, you use a different format for a better grade.

 

Writing: 10/25
I found little errors in the writing, It overall tells and explains the story of the test and outcome. The Color coordinated text makes it simple to read and keep track.

Verdict: I enjoyed the document to the fullest I could. This is a good example of how something can be expanded upon. Also make sure to not feel discouraged over the rating! EOI rating. EOI ratings are harsh but fair and we strive to induct new members when we see fit. 
I think the document deserves a.....

39/100



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