PixelatedPancakes Posted February 23, 2023 Share Posted February 23, 2023 (edited) https://docs.google.com/document/d/1eytg6Ptf9IlR6UN_UHjZvhnsYma_9kmisSUQeIqgpFo/edit Edited February 24, 2023 by Mangoo 1 Current : Former : Nu7 COL, HSU Founder (I wrote the SOP so I'm very important clearly), Nu7 MAJ x 2, E11 2LT, SCP Senior Mod, TTT SA, JvS Admin, TS Support 3, HSU Commissar (), RRH Guardian 01 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bobawhy Posted February 25, 2023 Share Posted February 25, 2023 It ain't bad. I hope this gets an 80+. 1 ALL EX: bobawhy/oni/sukuna current ranks: ci lcmd | a-1 enlisted | certified dumbass | event team member | moderator ex-ranks: scp-rp senior moderator + event team member | police-rp moderator | research lcmd we dont talk about my time as omega-1 lt-cmdr that never happened Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stryker_ Posted February 28, 2023 Share Posted February 28, 2023 Grammar/writing: 24/25 - Grammar and writing was great.Creativity/Execution: 22/25 - Loved this idea, the execution of it was also great, great job on this.Lore: 17/25 - Decent lore usage would be great to add in bit more details on it, you explained his "curing" but could explain on how he acts normal. Length/Format: 19/25 - I liked reading it, the length is good. Could add in bit more pictures explaining cell structure etc.. and maybe try another text type as this one is quite basic Extra points: 0/1 (This is given when I really enjoyed and loved reading the document 90+) TOTAL: 82/100 Great test log, it just misses small details to make it an amazing test log. Username: Stryker Status: Resigned Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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