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Neutralizing SCP-035 [RFA Grading] Second Attempt


Peanut The Great

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Grammar/writing: 13/25  - Quite some basic mistakes in the grammar, had some troubles when reading it.
 

Creativity/Execution: 17/25 - It's a good idea, but felt like you could of done more whit it, you described the details of what happens when you did this quite well, but you could tried some other tests while this was happening as this was quite basic but the execution and also the mishap that happened was great.

 

Lore: 5/25 - Most of the lore usage was from the SCP wiki, we want you to make your own lore really, it does not have to be 100% correct like in the wiki but use your own words of what you have in mind of the SCP.


Length/Format: 20/25 - Great format and the addition of pictures, length is also good.

 

Extra points: 0/1 (This is given when I really enjoyed and loved reading the document 90+)


TOTAL: 55/100

It's not a bad test log, but the plagiarism of the lore usage, together with the small grammar mistakes makes it not a document up to RFA standars.

Username: Stryker

Status: Resigned

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