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from: Research Assistant Manager Simon Wolffe <[email protected]>

to: Junior Researcher 'Roulette' <[email protected]>

Subject: Test Log Grade

 

Format: (25/25)

Outstanding format, all the important details are easily visible and I enjoy the appearance of the SCiPNET Terminal, reminds me of a now gone great researcher.

Grammar / Punctuation / Etc: (25/25)

No issues with grammar or punctuation.

Quality / Originality: (20/25)

Entirely original log, I will admit that the log is incredibly short (I'd personally recommend adding some more details, I.E. the pre-testing procedures, perhaps the briefing given to the d-class, just overall try to make this a longer log, but remember that quantity does not equal quality.)

Idea: (25/25)

This is an interesting test idea, and it leaves room for an extensive amount of further testing and a lot of possibilities? How will this develop further? IF 173 can be slowed down, then we can find a more permanent containment method for the object.

Total: (95/100)

Outstanding work, my only recommendation is to make your logs more in-depth and have more information, the rest is perfect. I'm excited to see more of you. If you have any further questions you may contact me by email, I'm always available. (ein#0001)

 

Kind regards,

Research Assistant Manager Simon Wolffe

Edited by Ein

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 Security Colonel Warden Legate Juggernaut Enforcer Research Administrator M.A.D. Site Operations Chief RRA Professor / MTF Delta-5 'Front Runners' Captain Veteran Raptor Operative / Internal Affairs Agency Assistant Director MTF Nu-7 'Hammer Down' Captain / Covert Agent / Deputy Head Field Training Officer / UN Global Occult Coalition Corporal Combat Medic Tactical Paramedic R&D Scientist  Marksman Recon Specialist / MTF Alpha-1 'Red Right Hand' Major Enforcer Squadron Lead

"We are the first line of defense. We are the first responders tasked to save those in danger. We have the responsibility to ensure the safety and well-being of all staff members. Because of that, you are the bravest men I have ever had the honor to serve with.”

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