Banna-Bred Posted February 14, 2023 Share Posted February 14, 2023 Encrypting file...........File Encrypted!Sensitive information aheadSenior Delta Command+ EYES ONLYhttps://docs.google.com/document/d/18vTuXOHvcBWVp7vSJP9cntWluR3WHP5V0_wS925dpq4/edit Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elevate Posted February 15, 2023 Share Posted February 15, 2023 [EOI Log Rating] Efficiency: 7/25 The Interrogation log could improve. A little too short on the writing and the Fonts/Action * can be worked on to look a bit better. Insight: 10/25 The Document explains some useful information, always room for more. I like the small details of explaining Weight, Height and Eye color. Presentation: 8/25 Seems like the regular format as always, of course you can make your own format or spice it up a bit with different colors or ideas. Good work on the colored text though! Writing: 10/25 Like I mentioned beforehand. the Documents text and way of using actions can be improved, some little spelling mistakes but overall decent writing. Verdict: The document has some decent color and variety, but the regular format and lack of information holds it back. I would like to see you improve and make amazing logs with your attention to detail! I think the document deserves a..... 35/100 - Graded by Elevate 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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