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'Reflections In Stone'


Dr. Zitterman

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Test idea/execution - 20/25 - It was a story like I was your grandchild listening to you tell all your great tales. The idea was executed nicely and well done

 

 

Grammar - 25/25 - no grammar issues that I saw. it was well written.

 

 

Presentation/format - 25/25 - Great format and was presented well. like a said it was a story and that was nice.

 

Quality/length 20/25 - Quality was great but length was short it is most definitely the one thing that is the best cause even short i lost myself in the story. I picked it up and read it all wanting more.

 

 

New Idea 1/1 you make these things up and have a mind that is so well thought out i must say you succeeded on getting me hooked i hope to see more from you

 

 

Overall, 91/100 = great work keep it up but maybe try another type. See what you can turn that into.

ACEE 

Former 

D5 HFTO, Research RS DELTA-5 DHG9 COL 

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