Avatarx Posted December 10, 2022 Share Posted December 10, 2022 https://docs.google.com/document/d/14txRmJCEy5XtXVVjUtErL8bCXyOpdsi1fAaJBdUa4D0/edit?usp=sharing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SaturdaySquadron Posted December 11, 2022 Share Posted December 11, 2022 Grade: 74/100 Meets Expectations Lore: 22/25 This test seems to follow the lore pretty well, but I have never heard of SCP-999 removing limbs from people so i deducted some points for that. Creativity: 20/25 The idea of using SCP-999 doesn't seem all too useful to me, but having SCP-999 gather information is a genius idea. I wish you had done another log where you had SCP-999 retrieve some information maybe from another member of CI. Presentation: 10/25 This document doesn't have much for creativity. You used the default test log format and there are zero pictures. I do think you used colors in your text fairly well so I will give you some credit. Writing: 22/25 A few grammar and spelling mistakes but the way you describe things is easy to imagine. I think your best quality is when you are describing sounds because it also helps me picture what may have been going on. Extra Notes: This is a pretty good log, I just think your next one should be longer and make sure to add some images as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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