SaturdaySquadron Posted December 9, 2022 Share Posted December 9, 2022 (edited) https://sites.google.com/view/scp-757-saturday-test-log/log-in?authuser=0 yeah, I made a website. Edited December 9, 2022 by SaturdaySquadron the link didnt send to the main page Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FeaR x Green Pikachu Posted December 10, 2022 Share Posted December 10, 2022 (edited) Grade: 77/100 Lore: 25/25 I legit tried to give you a 20/25 but I actually can't find a lore problem besides the year not being redacted with is a writing error. Well done Creativity: 18/25 Im adding the presentation creativity to this due to 25/24 not being enough points at all, also duplicating organs for CI are genius, seeing as you didn't try and get multiple organs on one subject was a bit sad but its still a great attempt. Extra points for The Caretaker since that was how I felt when I was done reading Presentation: 24/25 Im deducting 1 point because it was normal images and not stock images (It was actually just borders), I opened this doc and was in love the moment I opened it, got killed my a mementic agent then saw that all the hyperlinks worked and were properly formatted, Im actually drooling looking at this Writing: 10/25 As much as this pains me to do, I cant be biased despite this log looking gorgeous.Positives: the color scheme and layout was great, along with the size of the document and pictures.Negatives: the font was a tad bit small and I had to enhance to read it properly, the grey font made it a bit harder to read and there were a few grammar errors, which is expected. Also you didnt redact the year which is 99 times out of 100 a must Notes: By far one of my top three favorite logs ever Edited December 10, 2022 by FeaR x Green Pikachu Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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