ImTrash Posted December 7, 2022 Share Posted December 7, 2022 https://docs.google.com/document/d/1N8L4IwmTHX1wg-O7MRtXPOB6RW-5F9WJiV2guz8Ddeg/edit Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FeaR x Green Pikachu Posted December 10, 2022 Share Posted December 10, 2022 Grade: 39/100 Lore: 13/25 No major lore problems besides 016 usually always trying to make victims escape and spread the virus more, also the last subject that grew gills? Was he in water or something? It would hinder him more than anything else Creativity: 7/25 I like the idea of you putting it in nerve gas but the test just sort of feels like a waste of a subject really? We already know it can work in a grenade and all its effects that was listed here Presentation: 9/25 Bonus points for unique format but its nothing special at all, still like to see it over normal format but add a bit more character to it. Writing: 10/25 Good grammar throughout the entire test, however, font randomly changed near the end for no reason and it lacks any spice to it besides the full on end. Gray is a bit hard to read but not as bad as yellow or something. Notes: Not a bad test just read it and I dont fully understand the purpose of it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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