Stryker_ Posted October 25, 2022 Share Posted October 25, 2022 Name: Executive Researcher Stryker SCP: 076-2 Test: Device to make 076-2 think we are allies.Note: Clearance level 3 and above is needed to access this file!Test 076-2-XI Username: Stryker Status: Resigned Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grizz80 Posted October 27, 2022 Share Posted October 27, 2022 Your log has been assigned for grading! Expect a grade in 1-3 days! Username: GrizzPositions: Retired Awards: Wanderer's Library Archivist x2 | The Exemplary Investigator Award Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Magnus Rose Posted October 28, 2022 Share Posted October 28, 2022 Test idea - 23/25 - Excellent test idea, this could bring SCP-076-2 to be an ally to the foundation. Grammar - 20/25 - Overall good spelling. But, I see some issues. There is adding the ' in It's and other words. There is some punctuation issues as well, but nothing I would hardly argue on. You have to add The to a few sentences, here is an example - "Second subject" you would have to add "The second subject". Presentation/format - 21/25 - I like the format, it's interesting. The only thing I would recommend fixing is making a black box around the text. That would make it feel more satisfying and easier to read. Quality/length 19/25 - Good length. But, I have some complaints. There are some mistakes in the spelling, and some is sentences are hard to understand. The quality is generally good, but it would maybe decrease the risk of the test. This breach could lead to a massive massacre. Overall 83/100 - Excellent! 1 Research Assistant Manager | Research Field Agent Bourbon OA2 | Professor RRA Current: Moderator, Event team Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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