Human Posted October 9, 2022 Share Posted October 9, 2022 https://docs.google.com/document/d/1tyqORz4JLKV5sqMxayHnwLwvN2d_k4oAr8Bjv16A9tE/edit?usp=sharing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Catalyst Posted October 9, 2022 Share Posted October 9, 2022 Grade: 60/100 Efficiency: 15/25 You got the basics down but a lot more information could have been pulled. Even the lowest ranking people can be a gateway to higher levels of information, if you play your cards right. Insight: 20/25 i liked that you make the researcher write the name down, physical information is important when finding and exploiting faults in peoples lies. Presentation: 10/25 There was a lot of issues with formatting, mainly with cluttered stuff that could be removed for clarity. Look through the document, and check to see if anything could be removed to make it look less like a format and more like a research paper. Writing: 15/25 Decent, flows as expected but is nothing special. Feel free to “manipulate” some of the data to give a different tone to a figure or organization, it will help drive the point home. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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