Stryker_ Posted October 9, 2022 Share Posted October 9, 2022 (edited) Name: Stryker Rank: ResearcherTest: Cross test with SCP-009Note: To acces this document you need clearance level 2 or higher. Test Log-513 (Been a while since my last research document, so tried my best to get back on the right track so hopefully this is decent, any tips would be handy) Edited October 15, 2022 by Stryker_ Username: Stryker Status: Resigned Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grizz80 Posted October 15, 2022 Share Posted October 15, 2022 Writing/Grammar: 14/20 There are a few grammar mistakes. You did not putting commas in some places as well as "the" where it needs to be. Also the background is copied from the wiki which is not allowed unless you mention it some where in your document. Test Idea/Execution: 20/20 I like that you included 2 tests in one document. Your ideas and execution are phenomenally done. You have done an excellent job explaining what happened. Great job! Format: 18/20 The format is nice, its very unique. The font and text size are perfect for reading. Length: 17/20 The length is decent. It could have been longer, but I don't think it was needed. Lore: 19/20 Everything checks out with 009's lore. The test is explained, and it doesn't seem far-fetched. Including multiple tests a great idea. Good job! Wanderer's Library Archivist Point: 0/1 (This is my personal point, giving it to the document that I enjoyed. If you get this point, it means you made a phenomenal document [90+]) Total score: 88/100 This is a great document. You did a amazing job. Just try writing you own background research next time! Username: GrizzPositions: Retired Awards: Wanderer's Library Archivist x2 | The Exemplary Investigator Award Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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