Tanner0 Posted September 19, 2022 Share Posted September 19, 2022 Lore Rank/Name: JR Tanner SCP #: 999 Test Idea: Types of Candies Background Research: As most know Candy calms 999 down and makes him follow you. Hypothesis: Different types of Candy makes 999 act differently Observations (what happened?): D-Class 6741 was given 4 types of Candy to give to SCP-999. The Candies are 1. Spicy Jelly Beans 2. Surgery Candy Cane 3. Minty Candy Cane 4.Most Sour Candy THAT COULD BE MADE --------------------------------------------------------------- Junior Researcher Tanner: D-Class 6741 Give The SCP The Spicy Jelly Beans D-Class 6741: Alright what ever Researcher --------------------------------------------------------------- The D-class gives the Spicy Jelly Beans to 999. The SCP-999 Being to eat the Jelly beans He throws it up all over the D-class ---------------------------------------------------------------- JR Tanner: ALRIGHT So thats really bad, we now know to not give him anything Spicy D-6741: YEA I CAN SEE, oh my god there is so much fucking candy over me JR Tanner: Alright lets be safe and give him something Surgary ---------------------------------------------------------------- The D-class gives the Surgery Candy Cane to 999 The SCP right away begins to go insane and runs around and bounces off everything and begins to slow down after a good bit ---------------------------------------------------------------- JR Tanner: WOO Calm down Boy too much of a sugar rush D-6741: Thank god he did not throw up on me, what next Researcher JR Tanner: We are just going to give something to hopefully keep him calm and clean his pallet ---------------------------------------------------------------- The D-Class feeds the Minty Candy Cane to SCP-999 SCP-999 eat it slowly and has little reaction ----------------------------------------------------------------- JR Tanner: Alright that is good he is nice and calm down D-6741: Ok how many more Candies are we giving him? JR Tanner: Just one more dont worry you can go back to D-Block soon! ---------------------------------------------------------------- D-class is given the Most sour Candy know to mankind SCP-999 slowly eats the candy and that eats it all violently and slowly began to eat the D-Class whole body ---------------------------------------------------------------- D-6741: OH MY FUCKING GOD HELP HELP!!!! AHHHEDHAAA Officer Obama: OH FUCK opens fire at 999 but the bullets do nothing and just floats in 999 FUck fuck There is nothing we can do to save the D-class! JR Tanner: FUCK god dammit get back! Dont let him eat you too! D-6741: I CAN---t BREA--th Ahhheh--h-h-hEA-...................................... ---------------------------------------------------------------- The D-Class was Terminated by SCP-999 as he attempted to eat more of the Sour Toxic Candy Evidence/Visual Stimuli (Images): Did not know I had to get some Analysis/Conclusion (was your hypothesis correct, why or why not, how can this discovery benefit the foundation?): The test was concluded with the now Knowledge to not give him Very Sour Candy or we could end up with dead foundation personal Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Above the Law Posted September 20, 2022 Share Posted September 20, 2022 Please wait 1-3 days for grading! HOR CRYPTONUS Username: CryptonusHead of Research | MTF A-1 LCPL PINE "[OOC] Trial Moderator | MTF E11 MRK LCPL Prox: Alexx why did you suck me?" - Prox Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grizz80 Posted September 20, 2022 Share Posted September 20, 2022 (edited) Writing/Grammar: 14/20 There are quite a few grammar and writing mistakes. You missed an apostrophe in some words, as well as not putting commas in some places. Also, "Most sour" can be written as "Sourest". You capitalized some words that shouldn't be. Everything else is fine. Test Idea/Execution: 16/20 The test idea was interesting and original. You executed and explained it perfectly. You could have used some pictures, but I see you didn't know. This is good for someone who is a JR. Format: 12/20 The format is ok, it isn't anything special. You could have colored some words like "JR , D-6741" and also used the bolding tool. I like that you used the lines to separate the log. I recommend you make a document next time. it has so many tools and abilities to make your test log better. Length: 16/20 The length of the log is fine, you could have added more background information. Lore: 17/20 Everything checks out with 999's lore. The test is explained, and it doesn't seem far-fetched. Including four types of candy is a great idea. Good job! Wanderer's Library Archivist Point: 0/1 (This is my personal point, giving it to the document that I enjoyed. If you get this point, it means you made a great document) Total score: 75/100 This is a great document for someone who is a junior researcher. I suggest you make a document next time. Good job! Edited September 20, 2022 by Grizz80 Username: GrizzPositions: Retired Awards: Wanderer's Library Archivist x2 | The Exemplary Investigator Award Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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