Test Log: "Scorpion Slime"

[TheAmericanMan22]

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1oQx8jJN6O79vRYhFlhcjFO5MHpXWHVRX8zu49OrNAKc/edit?usp=sharing

Edited September 7, 2022 by TheAmericanMan22

[Catalyst]

Grade: 70/100

 

Lore: 20/25

Overall a good test idea that adheres to the properties of 999. Not a super revolutionary discovery, however it was well done and realistic.

Creativity: 20/25

Good use of scientific terms, stays analytical, and a great use of an audio log format.

Presentation: 15/25

Basic format, however there weren't any mistakes or missing information within it, so it makes up for it.

Writing: 20/25

Minimal mistakes, easy to read, designed well but not overly wordy.

Notes: The designation name for the file is creative, good on that, I generally advise changing the title of the document name to whatever you wanted your file name to be simply so that the document feels cleaner. Besides that, a decent log with some room for improvement, which is perfectly expected at your level.

[TheAmericanMan22]

41 minutes ago, Catalyst said:

Grade: 70/100

 

Lore: 20/25

Overall a good test idea that adheres to the properties of 999. Not a super revolutionary discovery, however it was well done and realistic.

Creativity: 20/25

Good use of scientific terms, stays analytical, and a great use of an audio log format.

Presentation: 15/25

Basic format, however there weren't any mistakes or missing information within it, so it makes up for it.

Writing: 20/25

Minimal mistakes, easy to read, designed well but not overly wordy.

Notes: The designation name for the file is creative, good on that, I generally advise changing the title of the document name to whatever you wanted your file name to be simply so that the document feels cleaner. Besides that, a decent log with some room for improvement, which is perfectly expected at your level.

Thank you! Always looking for any kind of suggestions and on how to improve more on it