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SCP-432: "Research Update as of 6/29/2022"


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  • 2 weeks later...

Grammar: 13/25, a few capitalization errors here and there + lack of dashes and other similar issues.

Writing: 5/25, the best part was a direct word for word copy of the SCP wiki's description, plagiarism ain't cool, yo. Aside from that everything else felt a bit lacking in each department and the test was just... just going in the SCP for a fact we already know.

Lore: 25/25, nothing exactly wrong here, nothing goes against the file itself so...

Aesthetic/Format: 8/25, I commend your use of google docs but there really isn't much eye candy here, along with the first gif just not feeling in place and making me confused on if this is meant to be on paper or on technology. Use of footers is good though, I don't see that too often.

OFFICIAL SCORE 51/100: Euclid.

Research Administrator | R.A.U. Commissioner | External Agent 3 "Oyasumi"

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