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SCP 079 and SCP 096 cross test


startort76

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Grading!

Grammar/Spelling/Typography: 8/10

Noticed some small sentence structing mistakes, "Under no circumstances must SCP 079 shall not be plugged into an outlet or any electric cords." is confusing to read and features unnecessary words.

Presentation/Style/Aesthetic: 8/10

Fairly generic but good formatting, maybe incorporate some more text formatting next time like dates, names, and SCP classification levels.

Writing: 8/10

I like the general tone and theme of the writing,  emotionless and calculating, but couldn't help to notice some inconsistencies with the SCP lore. For example, SCP 079 can only remember things from the last 24 (technically more) hours. Unless 079 makes something a part of its permanent memory, SCP 079 will forget it, like the Scramble Goggles Project.

Total:

24/30 / 8/10 / 80/100

I thought this one was creative and nice to read, maybe a bit more to your format and a bit more accuracy from the SCP lore would have made this document really special! Good work as always Startort, I look forward to seeing your new projects.

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