startort76 Posted April 20, 2022 Share Posted April 20, 2022 https://docs.google.com/document/d/1UaXYD_LBWZQkqOnYcvtuSGmJ5Qsll_eWL-QWXglhQtE/edit?usp=sharing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super_Smitty Posted April 27, 2022 Share Posted April 27, 2022 Test log assigned for grading, wait 1-3 days for your final score. Senior Event Team | Deputy Head of Research | Superstar Badge Winner | Foundation Star Award RFA - Agent Sigma 0A0 / RRH Analyst - Sierra 17 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ren1point0 Posted April 27, 2022 Share Posted April 27, 2022 Grading! Grammar/Spelling/Typography: 8/10 Noticed some small sentence structing mistakes, "Under no circumstances must SCP 079 shall not be plugged into an outlet or any electric cords." is confusing to read and features unnecessary words. Presentation/Style/Aesthetic: 8/10 Fairly generic but good formatting, maybe incorporate some more text formatting next time like dates, names, and SCP classification levels. Writing: 8/10 I like the general tone and theme of the writing, emotionless and calculating, but couldn't help to notice some inconsistencies with the SCP lore. For example, SCP 079 can only remember things from the last 24 (technically more) hours. Unless 079 makes something a part of its permanent memory, SCP 079 will forget it, like the Scramble Goggles Project. Total: 24/30 / 8/10 / 80/100 I thought this one was creative and nice to read, maybe a bit more to your format and a bit more accuracy from the SCP lore would have made this document really special! Good work as always Startort, I look forward to seeing your new projects. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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