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Project "Psyche"


Tazza

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Freedom at last.

Former: Assistant Inspector, Head of Longshot, Research Assistant Supervisor & Operations Supervisor, G.O.C. Officer & Head of bulldozers, CI COL, EOI D-2, DJ

Former: Scout Captain, Second Lieutenant, Senior Crewman, Storm Commando Captain.

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Test Scoring Sheet

Grammar : 9/10

Very few mistakes. For example, in the sentence "-we administered amnestics to any nearby medical/maintenance personnel that was traumatized-" , the "was" should be replaced with a "were".

Creativity : 8/10

Would have liked to seen a more original idea. The background research to the human brain is a very nice addition. Also liked the bit of backstory and what happened afterwards.

Design/Format : 10/10

Very nice formatting with complimentary coloring. The way you have formatted this really makes each bit of information stand out.

Final Test Score : 27/30

This is a very good test log, however I suggest rereading your logs when you are done to catch any mistakes. Showing your log to a fellow researcher may also help find those mistakes.

#RipRND you will be missed

 

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