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  • 3 weeks later...

Test Score Sheet

Grammar : 4/10
A lot of grammatical errors. An example being is "

The test subject Fernard was shaking a little and

Was slightly mumbling words i could not understand

He then was checked with vitals and was healthy." where you could've said "The D-class appeared to be shaking and was mumbling words that I couldn't understand"

Creativity : 5/10

The whole point of the test was to just have the D-class touch the skull, with nothing else included. I would recommend trying to expose him to "certain" SCP's after to see how they react

Design / Format 6/10: 

Format itself is pretty good. Placement of pictures and pictures themself however aren't the best in my opinion. I would recommend searching a little further for better looking pictures and better placement of your pictures.

 

Final Test Score : 15/30

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