Its Buck Posted February 23, 2022 Share Posted February 23, 2022 https://docs.google.com/document/d/1QiqXiBGaLHSqe75-NQElrhBYD42YjfnBnx7t7zGI1xo/edit Enjoy 1 RETIRED SCP-RP:Delta-5 CPT | Deputy Head G9| Medical DHFW Doctor. | E11 1LT | Head Ranger | D4 Vanguard FF5 | RnD EOI V3 Canibal ImperialRP: MC 1LT Bacon 3817 | DT SGT FF5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cecil Stedmen Posted February 24, 2022 Share Posted February 24, 2022 (edited) Test Log Assigned to RFA! Please wait 1-3 days for grading! Edited February 24, 2022 by Cecil Stedmen 1 Former SCPRP: CI R&D Chief Director of Operations || Research Administrator || RFA Operations Advisory || RRH Analyst Xray 77 || CI General || Senior Event Team || CI Lieutenant Commander || Exemplary Investigator Award Recipient || STF D4 Poseidon PL7 || A1 SPC "Quantum" Former ImperialRP: Naval Captain || Security Director || GM VI Former PoliceRP: EMS Captain || RRU Rapid Response Team Manager || FBI Assistant Director Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cecil Stedmen Posted February 26, 2022 Share Posted February 26, 2022 Overall Grade: 6.5/10 Lore: 7/10 It's clear you did a lot of research into this SCP, the lore behind this test is pretty reasonable and shows you took a lot of effort into writing this document. However, Gamma-13 specializes specifically in Anderson Robotics and doesn't really interact with other GOIs such as Gamers Against Weed from what I can tell. Delta-5 would have probably been a better fit to match more accurately with lore in my opinion. Creativity: 7/10 You did well and clearly thought up of creative yet reasonable ideas in this log. The test idea was overall great! Keep up the work! Presentation: 6/10 It's clear you put a lot of effort into this which I do respect. However, the colors in the last section made it very hard to read. Rule of thumb is either dark background against light text or dark text against a light background. Also using an image for the access granted portion wasn't a good choice compared to just sticking to text. Writing: 6/10 For the most part, the writing made sense; however I did spot a couple of minor grammar/spelling errors such as misspelling thorough as "thurow" and needless capitalization of certain words. Always double check your spelling! Notes: You did good work! If this wasn't RFA grading it prolly would have been an 8 or a 9. RFA has taken notice of the effort you put in, keep it up! -Agent Diesel OA2 Former SCPRP: CI R&D Chief Director of Operations || Research Administrator || RFA Operations Advisory || RRH Analyst Xray 77 || CI General || Senior Event Team || CI Lieutenant Commander || Exemplary Investigator Award Recipient || STF D4 Poseidon PL7 || A1 SPC "Quantum" Former ImperialRP: Naval Captain || Security Director || GM VI Former PoliceRP: EMS Captain || RRU Rapid Response Team Manager || FBI Assistant Director Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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