I disappear Posted February 5, 2022 Share Posted February 5, 2022 https://docs.google.com/document/d/14OxMIqlcN8mmj9B4SHnthw9sGGow9LeX0eG4r_uFH60/edit?usp=sharing Can you put a price on peace? 'Cause you can't feel my anger You can't feel my pain You can't feel my torment Driving me insane Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Star Posted February 5, 2022 Share Posted February 5, 2022 Welcome back to Research! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JDWhatever Posted February 5, 2022 Share Posted February 5, 2022 Grammar: (7/10) I don't see any major flaws in the spelling or grammar. The one thing I would suggest moving forward is adding more description to the documents and making it feel more in-depth. Design: (6.5/10) The design in my opinion is lack luster and and not the most thrilling design for a foundation document. It has a quasi-terminal feel but Lore: (10/10) The spot lore is pretty spot on I do wish that you went more in-depth with this test and pushed the details more but this is a great test. Creativity: (9/10) This is a creative test idea, I really enjoyed reading and would like to see more test similar to this in the future. TOTAL: 8/10 NOTES: Welcome back to Research Gordan as Starstep said, and if you keep doing these kind of logs! Keep doing great work! RESEACH ADMINISTRATOR Billybob | THE RFA GOD | Wanderers Library Award Recipient X2 | Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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