Helios Posted December 30, 2021 Share Posted December 30, 2021 (edited) https://docs.google.com/document/d/1CMuO0oflD8WbQjkie0PXVED1W7Kp4E90GsUo_vC68uQ/edit?usp=sharing Edited December 30, 2021 by Helios Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cecil Stedmen Posted December 30, 2021 Share Posted December 30, 2021 Overall Grade: 95/100 [A] Lore: 20/25 The overall lore in the document seems fair but I do not believe the outcome is reasonable as SCP 1845-1 does not appear to be capable of waging a war advanced enough to hamper operations without any sort of training due SCP 1845 only using tools from the dark ages. Personally I'd suggest creating a second document on attempting the train SCP 1845 on modern warfare so it'd better match with lore as it likely might be able to understand these things if taught and put directly under the supervision of a CI Military team. Creativity: 25/25 The idea of using SCP 1845 to wage a proxy war against the foundation and thin resources is a great idea and goes exactly in line with something the Chaos Insurgency would do! Presentation: 25/25 Presentation was smooth and you used the template well! Keep up the good work! Writing: 25/25 Writing was smooth and made sense but make sure to watch out for needless capitalization and make sure to put periods at the end of every sentence! Former SCPRP: CI R&D Chief Director of Operations || Research Administrator || RFA Operations Advisory || RRH Analyst Xray 77 || CI General || Senior Event Team || CI Lieutenant Commander || Exemplary Investigator Award Recipient || STF D4 Poseidon PL7 || A1 SPC "Quantum" Former ImperialRP: Naval Captain || Security Director || GM VI Former PoliceRP: EMS Captain || RRU Rapid Response Team Manager || FBI Assistant Director Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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