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SCP-966’s reactions to Chemical Burns and Corrosive Substances


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This 4,200 word behemoth took nearly Two Months of researching, observing, theorizing, and forming every single word to compliment the rest of the Document.  
 

Sifting through various images, descriptions, and accounts of Burn Victims kinda grossed me out but I did it for you guys.

Enjoy!

  https://docs.google.com/document/d/1I1X0wcPc288Loxhq51ZM0MdvtIUFovT47yBTOpb9mG0/edit

DHOR D;

RRH Analyst Lima-3;

Sarkic Archon General;

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Score 10/10

Alright here we go. start: 12:04 PM EST

+ Format is nice and visually appealing. 

- background description was taken from the wiki

+ Great test idea

+ I like that you included the types of acid and not just said, we through acid at it.

+ I love that you included rp actions in the log.

+ I like the little brief descriptions of the chemicals used.

++ Each chemical test has its own little story attached to it.

+ Analysis is clear and detailed. 

Great work D

 

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