RedKnight Posted May 29, 2021 Share Posted May 29, 2021 https://docs.google.com/document/d/1CQ4toZK9HjYL2FhouyIN1GRCw_pIQSAiXs1Wk3Wm1vU/edit?usp=sharing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
recon Posted May 30, 2021 Share Posted May 30, 2021 Score: 8/10 - Unique Idea - I like that you included why the machine was created - The description of the machine is short and could use a little bit of rephrasing. - Format is pretty bland, pages 2, 3, and 4 are just walls of red text. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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