Bulborb Posted May 2, 2021 Share Posted May 2, 2021 https://docs.google.com/document/d/1IUAw8TYziF4L410NEezmaeRwCkrT4YvAayWKCW6Ud3Y/edit?usp=sharing SCPRP | Mr. Inactive | Resigned Former: Admin | Maintenance Foreman Head Of H.L.P.R. Bot | MTF E11 SSGT Bulborb L1GT [On CC's] Frank West | MTF ETA 10 U2 "See No Evil" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jummy Posted May 2, 2021 Share Posted May 2, 2021 Grade: 55/100 Efficiency: 20/25 Insight: 20/25 Presentation: 10/25 Writing: 5/25 Additional comment: Most of this was pretty good, It felt a bit rushed however, atleast in the writing department. There are a lot of typos in this aswell, try and include more commas at certain points to split up your sentences, apostrophes matter alot aswell. Overall: [B-] Test quality: 50%-75%=Meets Expectations Research Administrator | R.A.U. Commissioner | External Agent 3 "Oyasumi" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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