Stumpy Posted January 24, 2021 Share Posted January 24, 2021 https://docs.google.com/document/d/1sxyXaR0c82nvG2IBytGHEzHtutVB_KGkT4Aa2XbbugQ/edit?usp=sharing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sulfur Posted January 27, 2021 Share Posted January 27, 2021 (edited) I would recommend you getting rid of the text in the format, for example: Get rid of "What happened during your test. Follow up with an Audio/Video Log." You could also change the first part of the Interrogation. Remember that 939 does not talk info, It talks in distress, trying to lure people in. 939 Only gains those voices when they have killed someone. Something to keep in mind . (Im not grading your test log, just recommending some stuff.) Edited January 27, 2021 by Sulfur Current: Security DCoS | SM | DHFW | EXCM | RMS | FTO | Secret Service DCOO Retired: Nu-7 CPT Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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