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SCP-966 Sleep Deprivation Effects (Last Test Log)


TG_Kilo

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Grade: 87/100

Lore: 25/25 Seems correct on lore.

Creativity: 25/25 Not many tests that use his sleep deprivation ability, especially on sleuth.

Presentation: 22/25 Good presentation.

Writing: 15/25 Writing was okay, but you kind of had a hole in the writing.
 

Test Quality: Exceeds Expectations!


Extra Notes: For the presentation try and make it a bit more colorful (I always color code separate people or background noises) and also do not remove the safety hazards part, even if there are none make sure to say that "on the record". For the writing, at one point you say that the shock collars is attached to the ankles, but then proceed to say that it was on the neck (just a little hole in the writing). Besides that it was a great test!
 

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Former: E11 COL | Deputy Head of FTOs | CI SRIC/LCPL

"We die in the dark so that others can live in the light."

 

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