Domo775 Posted November 17, 2020 Share Posted November 17, 2020 https://docs.google.com/document/d/1pX0x_0m--PP2v4NNNNxbIFFO6aQTC_DV_lCFEa_FEEc/edit i’ve probably killed you more then once Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dakota Posted November 17, 2020 Share Posted November 17, 2020 GRADE: 83/100 Lore: 20/25 We (especially not an enlisted) do not know what "05" is, listing him as that kind of ruins the part of him being an 05, if it was an interrogation and you found that out that would've been okay. Creativity: 25/25 The idea was creative. Presentation: 21/25 Very bland, didn't delete unnecessary things such as " What's the test about? (If it's an interrogation state that)" etc.. Writing: 17/25 Some minor grammatical, spelling, and punctuational issues. At the end log gets extremely confusing on whether you let him take 682 or if he slaughtered all CI involved. Test Quality: Exceeds Expectations Extra Notes: Remember, this log acts as a transcript of the audio or video log; marking down 05 is basically saying we know exactly who he is, next time I suggest putting either "?", "unknown man", "man in a suit", etc.. Also, in the audio log you state nothing of gunfire or a struggle; however, at the end of the log you imply that you denied the site director's orders and he killed you all. Make sure you keep your test log clear of such confusion. One last tip, if something like this happens I highly suggest releasing the SCP to at least take some of the Foundation members with you. Unfortunate that the test was interrupted. Current: [REDACTED] Former: E11 COL | Deputy Head of FTOs | CI SRIC/LCPL "We die in the dark so that others can live in the light." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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