Guinea Pig Posted November 13, 2020 Share Posted November 13, 2020 https://docs.google.com/document/d/1zCr-HqPjmuJBS8QapkOzzVJNvn8i1bT1hC6tEpCkxlo/edit Side note any and all feedback would be awesome thanks. I'm still trying to find a format that goes though the requirements but is in a different way of formatting. : ) [SCP-RP] Retired E-11 COL, HFTO and D4 Head | Former CI MSGT/2LT | Former Alpha-1 "Red-Right Hand" Guardian Delta-9 | Former Nu7 2LT/SM HSU Conscript | Former Om-9 2LT and EXP Seasoned Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mastertlf Posted November 13, 2020 Share Posted November 13, 2020 Grade: 87/100 Minor grammar mistakes such as "efforts" instead of effects I like the format you made, looks like an actual SCP document, plus its nice looking while still being effective at documenting your test The way you specify each D-classes number and all is also quite nice A lot shorter than I'd like, but hey some tests are just fast Despite this being a safe class test you still made it interesting, I must say that is pretty impressive Lore followed exactly from what I see Overall grade: B+ Nu-7 Hammer Down Captain, Previous LR in Research, Professional Minge, Medically Diagnosed With Cringe, Sad boi I Finally Retired Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
N0BLE FERRET Posted November 17, 2020 Share Posted November 17, 2020 i like it i ll give it B- but you need to fix some of your grammar Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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