briangamer5324 Posted August 17, 2020 Share Posted August 17, 2020 (edited) https://docs.google.com/document/d/1TnUpy6Qlj78P67Djr2xJM0QDLeNG5R-LKVu6rH3Iqzs/edit?usp=sharing here the link Edited August 17, 2020 by briangamer5324 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeoID Posted August 17, 2020 Share Posted August 17, 2020 Grade: 70/100 Lore: 25/25 Lore seems fine! Great job! Creativity: 15/25 Test log lacks some creativity. "After that i broke his leg ending him off." is a little too bland! Give us some action! Presentation: 15/25As to make it a little more official next time, try striving away from using shortened words such as "u" and make sure that capitalization is correct. Writing: 15/25As stated in Presentation, your capitalization and grammar could use some work, so make sure to work on that. Also pay attention to grammar and punctuation! This test log lacks a lot of that!Extra notes/Conclusion: The only issue in this test log is the way it was laid out and presented! Make sure to keep practicing your writing, and try and give us some more detail next time! With Best Regards,CI R&D Deputy Director Of Operations|| - Retired SCP-RP Event Team Leader || Retired SCP-RP Admin || -Retired CI R&D Head of Research|| Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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